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PostPosted: **Fri Dec 26, 2003 4:02 pm**

Cool! In a way, I like the previous one better (the profile was very good) but I think the overall composition and poses in the second one are better. So I can't be totally sure til I see it colored (which may have been the reason I liked the first one best... :grin:

). One thing about the fellow in the foreground (Haiku, I think you called him?)...his hands seem maybe just a bit small for his frame. IRL, most people's hands, when fingers are fully extended, will nearly cover their face. (This is not always true in anime; it could be larger or smaller, but many styles use large hands) I like the way their hair looks, though...^^ Reminds me of Kenshin and one of my characters.

PostPosted: **Fri Dec 26, 2003 4:05 pm**

yeah, i agree with inky, i like the composition of the second the best, and the hands are kinda small, at least for a guy. very cool stuff

PostPosted: **Fri Dec 26, 2003 4:28 pm**

yeah i guess his hands are a bit small no prob though

PostPosted: **Fri Dec 26, 2003 7:01 pm**

Cool. I really like your artwork.

PostPosted: **Fri Dec 26, 2003 10:38 pm**

how about drawings some warrior girls hmm? I am moved by your drawings. You do have some great angles!

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 9:05 am**

that's Haiku's hand is to small lol and eah i just stink at drawing girls but i do have a few in my story

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 10:26 am**

Looks professional!

But, I still like the other one better...^_^V

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 3:00 pm**

telkl me how this looks so far... i can still change the fire if it be needed

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 3:03 pm**

I think it's good, except that fire is shooting covering the mouth of the guy in the back, lol.

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 3:10 pm**

Oooh, I like...

The hair colors are so pretty! And I like the fire...^^

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 3:28 pm**

maybe this works better

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 3:52 pm**

That's good, and it leaves you more blank area for a logo.

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:23 pm**

I likie! How can you say you're not good on photoshop?!? X3;;; The second one only came up as an "X" for me for some odd reason...

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:24 pm**

im better han i though :sweat:

i dont know why you got an x though

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:35 pm**

OKAY! this should justa bout do it!!!! FINALLY!!!

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:38 pm**

Sweet!!!! great job it looks awsome! lots of Fire :cool:

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:43 pm**

OK, having seen the finished product, I can officially say I like the second one best!

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:46 pm**

I agree, very nice

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 5:16 pm**

to see the larger version of the pic go to http://www.laserguided.com/page2.htm and scroll down

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 5:25 pm**

very cool, makes me want to get photoshop.

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 5:47 pm**

thanks guys! i know one thing now for sure... i need a brake... i dont wan tto hold another pencil!

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 6:44 pm**

I just got back from your website, and I must say, good job. Aside from not understanding Japanese, and thus missing out on your scans of Kenshin, very good.

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 6:47 pm**

i didnt scan those i found them on line ...somewhere...

PostPosted: **Sat Dec 27, 2003 7:26 pm**

Oooog! Good! ^0^ Yes, I like this one best now too!

PostPosted: **Sun Jan 04, 2004 6:12 pm**

well. i have been to this site in eons. CAA i mean. but i tend to drop in now and then.
well you look pretty talented. good job. i can tell you get a lot of your influence of rk. haha. some of the characters and positions seem oddly familiar. its good though. getting position and perseptive help from actual mangas help sumtimes. your art looks good though. noice.
the pic on your avatar is very familiar. i think there is a rk pic with that same position. i like how you took that position and put your character into it. and succeded pretty well too. good good.

PostPosted: **Fri Jan 09, 2004 1:44 pm**

Behold the glory of the Meta- Mari race!

PostPosted: **Fri Jan 09, 2004 4:03 pm**

oooo, pretty! : D!!!!

PostPosted: **Fri Jan 09, 2004 4:34 pm**

It's lovely! Only one thing... doesn't coming have one "m?"

PostPosted: **Fri Jan 09, 2004 4:45 pm**

*looks at pic again* oh yea, lol, could've fooled me ^_^

PostPosted: **Fri Jan 09, 2004 4:47 pm**

*looks at your avator and glomps it* awww, so cute. *cough* but yeah, for some reason I like to put 2 "m's" in coming too so try not to feel bad.

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